She was tall, dressed in white , wearing a pith helmet with veils that floated across her face, settled around her shoulders, and trailid down her back. She looked like an african bride. Lifting the tops off the boxes, she peered inside, swinging a tin bucket of smoke back and forth. Clouds and bees rose up and flew wreaths her head.
1. how she describes the woman in this page is.
1.The way the woman was dressed she make it seem like much more then it is.
2.How she descrbes what the woman is doing is very specific.
3.when she wrote this page she used a lot of comma's to make the page more understanding.
4. The auther can use a lot of words to describe one little thing.
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